...的带领下去了老人院(old people’s home)看望老人。同学们为老人们...

Attention, please!
Last weekend, Mr. Li took my classmates to the old people’s home to visit them. We bought some fruits, some flowers and some gifts for them. Here, some my classmates cleaned the room, swept the floor, or combed their hair and chat with them and so on. As for two classmates helped them cook for dinner. At last we sang and danced together. We were all very happy.
That’s all. Thank you.

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